For miss Lilli: Your eyes as blue as the sky. Your hair as gold as Grain. Your dress as yellow as cello. Your silly band as brown as my skin. You're beautiful.
Autumn, thank you! I love this poem, and I love the first draft you wrote on paper too. My favorite simile is "Your dress, as yellow as cello." Here is one for you:
For Autumn: Your mind is a kaleidoscope of ideas, Each one as explosive as the sun.
Autumn, thank you! I love this poem, and I love the first draft you wrote on paper too. My favorite simile is "Your dress, as yellow as cello." Here is one for you:
ReplyDeleteFor Autumn:
Your mind is a kaleidoscope of ideas,
Each one as explosive as the sun.
thank you miss lilli for the beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteYou're welcome : )
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