I started walking to school. I don't really like it though because of Jamie Hills and her posse. They think they're popular. So, I went to my locker and the bell went brrring brring. I ran to homeroom. Jamie was gone. I looked everywhere when suddenly something weird happened. Could she have disappeared? Or is she sick? Mrs. Maples, said "Ms.
Walters we are so sorry about Jamie's DEATH." What?
She was dead? Everyone stared at me with a curious
look like I was THE killer. I walked to my desk . There was a note saying: I know your secret.
You can't run or hide Jamie Hills.
What secret does she know? I grabbed my diary and wrote in capitals : 1.JAMIE HILLS DEAD? AND KNOWS MY SECRET? MY FAULT? US FRIENDS?....
Miss Walters is there anything you need to share with the class about? I said "Yes mam. Did her parents tell you this?"
"No, her sister."
"What sister?"
"YOU ELIZABETH."
"ME?" Was she serious? I barely liked her! That would explain everything she and I talked about: family. I grabbed my diary and wrote 2. US SISTERS? RELATED? HOW? WHY DIDN'T ANYONE EVER TELL ME THIS ? IS SHE A VAMPIRE OR WEREWOLF? I CALLED MRS. MAPLE?
THERE IS NO CONTINUING CHAPTER PLEASE PLACE COMMENTS.
Hi Autumn,
ReplyDeleteI am wondering, why are there no continuing chapters for this story? As a reader I am interested to know how Elizabeth is going to use the notes in her notebook. I really like how the main character keeps using questions. This helps us to know what she is thinking! But, I am interested to hear the answers to those questions in a continuing chapter...
- Miss L
Hi Autumn,
ReplyDeleteI think this is a wonderful chapter! I like how the main character used her diary in the story. I hope you will write another chapter to this story!
Mr. Everett